英作文を添削していただけると嬉しいです。よろしくお願いします🙏

QUESTIONについて、あなたの考えとその理由を2つ英文で書きなさ い。語数の目安は50~60語です。 Do you think people should travel abroad to understand different cultures better?

解説の1番最初に同じ形〜とありますがそれはどういうことでしょうか？

Les 次の英文を Chw reality years. The and annoye again and s The an see it. We do so it is perception: possible ac senses a process int then exper therefore of the num process sig of our brai our brain's 方 発音する / way beginner [] 初級者、初心者/exception 例外/2 pronounce [動] 法 / make oneself understood 人の考えを理解してもらう (直訳「人の言っているこ と)を理解される状態にする」→「人の考えを理解してもらう, 話が通じる」となりま す)/considerable たくさんの/* diverse 圏 さまざまな、多様な/background 名 背 環境/* conscientious 誠実な真面目な/meet a need ニーズを満たす、要求に 応える / feedback 反応 (参考) 意見/aspect圏観点 / on a regular basis 定期的に *consistently 一貫して/indicate示す / be pleased with ~~に満足している ' devise 考案する / assignment 課題/ encourage 人 to 原形 人に~するよう に促す 推奨する/ advise 人 of ~ 人に~を伝達する/community-based 形 地域密着 型の/facility 施設設備/report 報告する 業に発音指導を取り入れ始 ドバックで目立たなくなっ て彼女の初級クラスに出る。 ラスはときに,現在の受講 るようになりつつあるとに ' gradually [] だん 文法・構文 be keen to 原形 / how to 原形という直前の文と同じ形が使われており、ど ちらも「英語を話せるようになりたいと思っている」 という内容です。 このように同じ形 の反復は同じ意味になります (Rule 25p.103)。 a colleague of ours は, a friend of mine 「友人のうちの1人」 と同じ構造で、「私たちの同僚のうちの1人」という意味です (文章で初出の場合は,まだ特定されていないのでmy colleague や my friend とは言わない 場合が多いです)。 "At first 「初めは」は、「初めは~だった。 だけど･･･」という形で後 ろに but や however が続くことが多いです。 今回も次の文の冒頭でHowever が使われてい ますね。 ちなみに 後半のandは動名詞のカタマリ2つ (devising と advising~)を結 んでいます。 〈these + 名詞〉は「まとめ表現」です。 直前の内容がわからなくても 「授 業に変化を加えた」 のだと推測できます。 oqqo gniesomni bogswoona fari] ainomngian 2 'Vicki (gradually) came to understand (that (what the students (really) wanted o> was not an increased opportunity [to speak], but explicit instruction [on how to speak〕 (that is), explicit instruction [in pronunciation]〉. She realized she had been avoiding (actually) teaching pronunciation how to go about it)). 3 (Once she was (a little) unsure (because she os (v) V (o) instruction 指導/on 音/2go about ~~に" 度、かつて」と区別して ~ もはや~ない / feat かつての/attend 2 あふれかえる/be 文法・構文 漢方 2 be unsur ますが,後ろに what は 「接続詞」 で, On much so that ~は「 SV 構文 「とても〜 で」という意味 ( に移っていた前の め、和訳では「そ learning to speak いう意味です(「 1 (When ter (seemingl

この2つの"they"は何を指してますか？？教えてください🙏

Have you ever noticed that red and yellow are often. used for warning signs? Vivid and warm colors are chosen because they catch people's attention. They help people notice signs whose messages should be understood immediately. Besides the choice of colors, the contrast of colors plays an important role in conveying messages clearly and quickly. For example, emergency exit signs show a picture of a green figure on a white background. The contrast between green and white parts helps us distinguish the figure clearly from its background even in smoke or fire.

下線部③を並び替えてください。という問題なんですが、どのように考えたらいいのか分かりません。 教えてください！

19 Read the passage and answer the questions. ORG OF US. udma2 to enoitelugo Imagining locations for a wedding, people think of churches, 008 00 hotel chapels, or even a beautiful beach or park somewhere. However, there are ①many more fantastic and unusual places where wedding planners can arrange the perfect day for couples 5 who want something a bit different. 0001 Located deep underground, the National Showcaves Centre for Wales can provide a stunning background to a wedding ceremony. There is a huge section in the caves called the "Dome of St. Paul's," which includes two waterfalls flowing into a large lake. 10 The cave's natural and romantic setting ②could make a wedding truly special. 009 008 00% QHints aros chapel [tfæpǝl] 礼拝堂, チャペル the the ocean. stunning [stániŋ] とてもすばらしい cave [kéiv] than waterfall [wó:tǝrfò:]] 008 00 spectacular [spektækjulǝr] 壮観な As some people might not want to marry in a cave, a company 008 in New Zealand offers a wedding ceremony in a spectacular outdoor setting. The company will fly couples and their guests by 15 helicopter to the top of a mountain. Looking at the amazing fuquq ow! T panorama of mountains, lakes and rivers, lovers ③[ will become might their wedding / how / easily imagine ] one of the most memorable days of their lives.nd 20 a (S) atos Even more adventurous couples can get married underwater. 20 Putting on scuba gear, the couples descend to a depth of 15 gear [giǝr] meters in the sea off the coast of Trang province in Thailand. Of course, exchanging wedding vows underwater is difficult, so they T 25 need to use a series of diving hand signals, ending with an "OK" sign to indicate "I do." As well as these locations, there are thousands of other places around the world that can offer lovers an alternative to the tradition of walking down the aisle. Perhaps f future weddings will be held in space, on the moon, or even on Mars. (269 words) 『リーディングに役立つ英文法-ENGLISH CHALLENGER」 Kyoko Okamoto, Benedict Rowlett Aya Kinoshita, Sara Ellis*** descend [disénd] b off the coast of ~ ~沖で Trang province in Thailand タイのトラン県 vow [vȧu]) pninatai.l aisle 通路 onsiquis el lliw omi) indW (S)

(3)長文問題の一部です そのこと は、なぜ、The thingではなく、Thatなのですか？ A. That makes the trains more beautiful.

2 次の英文は,高校生の和樹 (Kazuki) とフィリピン (the Philippines) 出身のベン (Ben) との鉄道 (railway) に関する会話である。 この英文を読んで (1)~(6)の問いに答えなさい。(16点) Kazuki : I hear you like railways. I like railways, too. Ben : Really? Yes! I'm *especially interested in Japanese railways because old Japanese trains are running in the Philippines. Kazuki: Old Japanese trains? A Ben : Yes. Some Japanese people enjoyed watching the old Japanese trains and taking pictures of them in the Philippines. Kazuki: That ( @ ) nice! Ben : Many old Japanese trains are running in some other countries, too. Japanese trains are popular because of their good "quality. Kazuki Our trains are loved "abroad! B Also, I think "reusing things is good. Ben : That's right. Some trains are reused in Japan, too. Kazuki : Oh, really? Ben : Yes. Some of the old trains from the Hibiya Line in Tokyo are now running on the *Hokuriku Rail Road. Kazuki I see. I didn't know that! Ben : One of my good friends likes railways, too. He told me about it ( Kanazawa with him. ) I went to Kazuki: The trains on the Hibiya Line have a *silver *design, right? Ben : Yes, but it "changed. Now it's an orange design. It's the *symbolic color of the Hokuriku Rail Road. Kazuki : Railway lines have their own colors. The symbolic colors of the *Ainokaze Toyama Railway are blue and green. Ben : Blue is the *image of the sea and green is the image of nature like mountains and trees, right? Kazuki: Yes. The designs on the *left and right sides of the train have different colors. Did you know that? Ben : No, I didn't. ( (C) ) are they different? Kazuki : If you look at the side with the blue design, you can see the sea in the *background of the train. If you look at the side with the green design, you can see the mountains in the background of the train. Ben : Wonderful! The design of each side of the train and its background have the same image. I want to take pictures of the trains with the beautiful background.

英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ もっといい表現や言い回しがあったら知りたいです。

問題 B. Imagine that you are going to go on a trip to England on a student exchange program. You will give a short talk about your country. Write a speech for people from England that tells them some interesting or unique points about the culture or customs of your country. Write about 100 words in English. The first sentence of the speech is given for you on the answer sheet. ・解答欄末尾の所定の箇所に、解答に用いた語の数を 「 (100 words)」 のように • 必ず記すこと。 ただし, 解答欄に印刷されている部分およびピリオドやコンマなどの句読点 は語数に含めません。 [解答欄: 書き出し] Today, I'd like to talk about my country.

金沢大学2024英語の英作文の添削をしていただけませんか。見づらかったらすみません。

In my opinion, we should be promote equality and recognition of educational background. Now, stady devide continue to spread further. For example. TV problem I have watched showed a poor boy do in South Africa The boy who working housewort not have time enough to go and money enough to do To the school 26 I proved that there are many childrench would like to go to school. I believe that everyone , but they cannot do should understand those situation in which children suffer from having little money. Moreover, put into we. practice such as donating money and volunteer that we help them to study. Through those experiences, educational background may close to equality 11年

①にはなぜif I hadではなくwithoutが入るのですか？

edmoo to amataya Isnoitiben (2) Kazuya: You studied abroad when you were young, didn't you? Mother: Yes, I studied in America when I was a college student. That was a valuable experience. I Yester became friends with a lot of people from different backgrounds. ( ①) that experience, re I(2) 無知 ) much more narrow-minded and ignorant of the outer world. Kazuya: Actually, I think I would like to study abroad, but I'm not very good at English. (3) I National) English fluently! ④ Mother: If I ( would dare tapete cuidane aid 6 not worry much T

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Onomatopoeia and verbs Lap Roar Click Howl Whimper Crunch Screamed Screech Whir Gurgle Chirp Squeak Splash Panting Clatter Thud Tinkle Clang Flap Murmur Rustle (BONUS use correct form -plain, -ing, -ed) o. The car screeched loudly when it stopped suddenly 1. The gentle waves hhhh at the shore. 2. "Ooowwwww," Sarah loudly when she fell down. 3. The dog is quietly because it is lonely. 4. 5. "Its Mrs. Green Apple!" the girls ! I walked on the icy snow. loudly when they saw the door open! 6. The blender 7. I could hear the small river 8. The little bird 9. as it makes the milkshake. in the background. happily. ! The floor was noisy when I walked on it. 10. Tom made a loud 11. "Wow, that was a long run!" I 12. The dishes when he jumped into the swimming pool. hard. onto the floor. 13. The book dropped onto the floor with a loud_ 14. The wind chime 15. The when the wind blew. gates warned a train was coming.

ここでの one has はどのような働きでどのような意味を持ちますか？

with respect to intelligence. Moreover, in measuring intelligence one has, of course, to take into account the effects of education (4) and cultural background. T 10 lesly of famous people have also